1979. Choose a complex and
important character in a novel or a play of recognized literary merit who might
on the basis of the character's actions alone be considered evil or immoral. In
a well-organized essay, explain both how and why the full presentation of the
character in the work makes us react more sympathetically than we otherwise might.
Avoid plot summary.
In the play Death of a Salesman by Arthur Miller, Willy Loman is seen
through different viewpoints. Throughout the play readers feel anger and
frustration towards Willy Loman due to his immoral and evil actions, but at
other times readers feel guilt and maybe even sympathy towards him. Willy
Loman is a complex character who can evoke the desired emotion from readers
when appropriate. Readers feel anger towards Willy when they find out
about his affair and his constant lack of authority when it comes to his son
Biff, but readers feel sympathy when they learn about Willy’s situation, and
his immense sense of pride.
At the beginning of the play readers find out that Willy Loman has been
having “flashbacks” that readers and his sons blame on Willy just being
crazy. As the play goes on Linda Loman explains that Willy’s salary has
been taken away and he’s solely working on commission, Willy has been traveling
hundreds of miles per week, and he is suicidal. At this point Arthur
Miller evokes feelings of sympathy from the readers, and also from Willy’s sons
who now see Willy in a new way. Miller conveniently added this piece of
information right after readers find out Willy is having an affair, so they
don’t feel like he’s only a bad guy.
Adultery is definitely seen as an immoral action, and Willy Loman is guilty for
cheating on his wife with another woman while he is out on his business
trips. Readers find out that this affair may be more than just for fun
when the woman says “I’ll put you right through to the buyers.” This
means that Willy could be using her just to get ahead in the business world,
and that would just cause more anger towards Willy. Linda’s kind and
understanding attitude towards Willy angers readers even more, because Willy is
taking Linda for granted, and going off to fool around with another woman.
Throughout
the play readers learn that Will has a great sense of pride and doesn’t want
his family to see him as a failure. This
idea is emphasized when Willy lost his job, and wouldn’t accept a new job from
Charley. At this point readers may be
frustrated with Willy, but at the same time they would feel sympathy, and some
readers may even be able to relate to what Willy’s going through.
Lastly Willy has no sense of morals when it comes to his favorite son;
Biff. Biff is a thief and doesn’t care about school, but Willy has no
sense of authority, because he believes Biff will get ahead in the real world
due to his looks and likeability. At the beginning of the play Biff
steals a football in one of Willy’s flashbacks and when Willy finds out he says
“Sure, he’s gotta practice with a regulation ball, doesn’t he?” This just
shows that Willy doesn’t have a good sense of morals and believes Biff can do
no wrong; this action evokes anger from readers because Willy isn’t acting as
the authority figure, but rather as Biff’s friend. Also when Biff tells
Willy that his math teacher is only failing him because he doesn’t like Biff
because Biff imitated him in front of the whole class Willy just asks if the
other students thought if it was funny. This proves that Willy doesn’t
discipline his sons for their bad behavior, but just wants them to be well
liked.
Arthur Miller did a great job creating the complex character of Willy Loman who
manages to be evil, yet still have readers cheering him on due to the sympathy
they feel. Willy Loman is a very different character who manages to be
loved and hated at the same time.
I think that this prompt revision essay is very good! I really liked your introduction and how you hit on all of the main points that you talked about throughout your essay. That was a good way to give the reader an idea of what the essay is about. I also noticed that the prompt said to avoid plot summary, and I thought you did a very good job of doing that. I think you added only the necessary details to get your point across. Something that I think you could work on a little bit is in the third paragraph, you say how the affair angers the readers, but in the prompt it says to write about how the character in the work makes us react more sympathetically than we otherwise might, instead of reacting with anger. So I would suggest maybe adding in why the reader might feel some sympathy from that. Other than that, I think you did a nice job with this essay!
ReplyDeleteNeha, the first thing that came to my mind while reading this piece is that maybe Death of a Salesman isn't really the best work to choose when talking about an evil or immoral character that we are supposed to like. Your points showed me that he really actually is a good choice for this prompt. I think that it's a bit of a stretch to call him "evil" though, so if I were you I would stick to just saying "immoral" to refer to the prompt.
ReplyDeleteThe structure of your essay could use a bit more clarity. I think it would flow much better if you placed the negative paragraphs about Willy at the start, to explain how he is immoral, but then used the positive aspects to show how he could be endearing to his audience in some way(s). I also think that you should use a wider range of emotions to describe how an audience might feel about Willy; I saw a lot of "sympathy" and "angry" as well as "frustrated", but the use of some more colorful/detailed description would be nice (e.g. empathy, pity both could be used to slightly change the emotions that the audience would feel and might better fit in some places where you wrote sympathy).